Revision Strategy. I would like you to take some minutes and reflect on your peer review experience. Return to your peer’s notes. Flip through your own. Now is the time to develop a strategy. Your strategy is the plan of action you will take to achieve your overall aim (Dictionary.com). Your strategy should include:
- Revisit the grading rubric as well as my notes on your last paper. What new skills are you working to incorporate into your new paper?
- What are your revision goals, articulated in your own words?
- List the steps you plan to take to achieve these goals (in order of priority)
- What you see as your biggest challenge?
- And what will you do if a challenge comes up that proves too difficult for you to solve on your own? In other words, what resources do you plan to use?
- One of my biggest focuses for this paper will be structuring my paragraphs a little bit more. At the very least, I hope to do a better job introducing quotes and using quote sandwiches.
- My revision goals are to restructure my essay so that my naysayer paragraphs lands at the end of my paper. I am going to attempt to start my argument deeper into the conversation and avoid explaining the bare bones of the argument. I also am going to complicate my thesis a little bit more with the counter argument and do a better job incorporating it into my argument. I am looking to go more in depth into why diversity of storylines is so important. There are also a lot of places where I can trim down my paragraphs. Overall, I am looking to refine my argument into more sophisticated and developed ideas.
- First, I will read through my essay and look for places where I can edit down, or eliminate so of my wordiness and repetitiveness. I would like to add to my thesis and include more about the benefits of the standard narratives. Next, I would like to eliminate my first paragraph about narratives and write a new paragraph that complicates my thesis using Strawson. I want to look for more creative and sophisticated ways to use his quotes. Finally, I would like to draw more connections as to why diversifying storylines is so important.
- My biggest challenge will probably be finding another use for Strawson’s quotes. I wasn’t the biggest fan of his essay and his ideas frustrate me, but I think I will be able to find ways to use his ideas to complicate my own.
- If I can’t find more ways to use Strawson then I may email you and ask you if the way that I am using his seems effective. I can also ask a friend who doesn’t know the essays if my use makes sense to them.